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you have just missed you friend party. write apologies letter.

you have just missed you friend party. write apologies letter. GwNrw
Dear John, I am writing to apologies for missed your birthday. i can not tell you how sorry I am. I am going to your birthday with my parents but I am working new office at the moment so I did not find enogh time. My new boss is very demanding for work. On the other hands I missed your party big problem with my mother's healthy. You know she has a stomachache for long time and she fell her very bad so I had to go to the doctort with my mother. Anyway Iwould like to make it up to you by treating you to coffe at the new cafe that is just opened up in town for once again celebrate your birthday. Let me know wahat date and time suit you. Hope you might like this idea and please accept my apologies once again. Yours, Durdona.
Dear John, I am writing
to apologies
for missed your birthday.
i
can not
tell
you how sorry I am. I am going to your birthday with my parents
but
I am working new office at the moment
so
I did not find
enogh
time. My new boss is
very
demanding for work. On the other hands I missed your party
big
problem with my mother's healthy. You know she has a stomachache for long
time and
she fell her
very
bad
so
I had to go to the
doctort
with my mother. Anyway
Iwould
like to
make
it up to you by treating you to
coffe
at the new
cafe
that is
just
opened up in town for once again celebrate your birthday.
Let
me know
wahat
date and time suit you. Hope you might like this
idea
and
please
accept my apologies once again. Yours,
Durdona
.
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IELTS letter you have just missed you friend party. write apologies letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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