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Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition

Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition 73VRX
Dear Joy, I hope you are doing well and healthy. I’m just writing to share the precious occasion of winning a photography competition. Competition was held on 25th of November at police grounds held by National photographic Institute of India, Hyderabad. Enormous number of people participated in the event from various states. I was among them one. In this contemporary epoch wining is not that bite of a cake. I had a huge number of clicks but I was pretty confused which one I need to present in competition, Consequently I have decided to post a pic of mother tigress playing with his kitten. It depicts the beautiful scenery of jungle and green grass in between the mother tigress was relaxing and enjoying with his kitten. I had taken this gallery from my new dslr-95. Gradually as I displayed it in competition experts panel has selected it because of its extraordinary message towards save wildlife. That was the time I forgotten all my stress which I took to win this race. I would personally invite you for this eve because I have taken 1 pass for you. Hoping to see you in the furture. Lots of love, Nice
Dear Joy,

I hope you are doing well and healthy. I’m
just
writing to share the precious occasion of winning a photography competition.

Competition
was held
on 25th of November at police grounds held by National photographic Institute of India, Hyderabad. Enormous number of
people
participated in the
event
from various states. I was among them one. In this contemporary epoch wining is not that bite of a cake. I had a huge number of clicks
but
I was pretty confused which one I need to present in competition,
Consequently
I have decided to post a pic of mother tigress playing with his kitten. It depicts the
beautiful
scenery of jungle and green grass in between the mother tigress was relaxing and enjoying with his kitten. I had taken this gallery from my new dslr-95.
Gradually
as I displayed it in competition experts panel has selected it
because
of its extraordinary message towards save wildlife. That was the time I forgotten all my
stress
which I took to win this race.

I would
personally
invite you for this eve
because
I have taken 1 pass for you. Hoping to
see
you in the
furture
.

Lots of
love
,

Nice
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IELTS letter Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition

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  American English
6 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
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