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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client

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Dear Joy, I am writing this letter to apologize about the loss of crucial client of our firm due to delay in submission of project. Very firstly I would like to tell my deepest regret for what had happened. On the contrary to it as you are aware of pandemic which brought a big disaster to whole functioning of the society. Whole state went under lock down there were huge power cuts which distracted our focus, apart from that whole government bodies did not function well. Even though I tried my level best to cope with flow. In the mean while I was affected with Corona whole family went under quarantine. My teammates are rigorously worked beyond their limits Consequently we were still unable to complete work in prescribed time limits. I will take this as a lesson in the upcoming projects to be ahead of the work and submit prior reaching deadlines. Once again, I sincerely regret my mistake. Please accept my apologies Yours sincerely, Tray

Dear Joy,

I am writing this letter to apologize about the loss of crucial client of our firm due to delay in submission of project.

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Yours sincerely
,

Tray