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I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning the matter of publicize for the voluntary vacancies for “ Love leaf program” which will take place at the beginning of this month.

I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning the matter of publicize for the voluntary vacancies for “ Love leaf program” which will take place at the beginning of this month. 2RN1X
Dear Mr. Tran Viet Quang, I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning the matter of publicize for the voluntary vacancies for “ Love leaf program” which will take place at the beginning of this month. Because there are various activities planned for the program, there are not enough staff here to take care of the children and complete the program. So we need volunteers for this activity. The most important requirement is that candidates need to be sympathetic and really willing to help our children. I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published next week. I hope that you will agree because both volunteers and children will get a lots of benefits from our program. For volunteers, it’s a great way to gain their experience about many fields such as education, social work, healthcare. With cooperating and communicating with our children, other volunteers, they will increase social life skill especially communication skills. Furthermore, they will understand the value of sharing and the important of generosity. Also, children can obviously be supported and assisted by society because the goal of programs is children's happiness, help them somewhat alleviate their disadvantage. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to hearing from you reply in the near future. Your sincerely,
Dear Mr. Tran
Viet
Quang
,

I am writing on behalf of a
children’s
home to request your assistance concerning the matter of publicize for the voluntary vacancies for
Love
leaf
program”
which will take place at the beginning of this month.

Because
there are various activities planned for the
program
, there are not
enough
staff here to take care of the
children
and complete the
program
.
So
we need
volunteers
for this activity. The most
important
requirement is that candidates need to be sympathetic and
really
willing to
help
our children.

I would be most grateful if you could pass on and advertise the recruitment in the local newspaper published
next
week. I hope that you will
agree
because
both
volunteers
and
children
will
get
a lots
of benefits from our
program
. For
volunteers
, it’s a great way to gain their experience about
many
fields such as education, social work, healthcare. With cooperating and communicating with our
children
, other
volunteers
, they will increase social life
skill
especially
communication
skills
.
Furthermore
, they will understand the value of sharing and the
important
of generosity.
Also
,
children
can
obviously
be supported
and assisted by society
because
the goal of
programs
is children's happiness,
help
them somewhat alleviate their disadvantage.

I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to hearing from you reply in the near future.

Your
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter I am writing on behalf of a children’s home to request your assistance concerning the matter of publicize for the voluntary vacancies for “ Love leaf program” which will take place at the beginning of this month.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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