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You are on a holiday in a town by the sea. You decide to write a postcard to your friend, Sam. Write a postcard to Sam. In your postcard, you should • Explain why you chose this town for a holiday • Describe something you have enjoyed doing on your holiday • Arrange to meet Sam when you return. Write 35 – 45 words on your answer sheet.

You are on a holiday in a town by the sea. You decide to write a postcard to your friend, Sam. Write a postcard to Sam. In your postcard, you should • Explain why you chose this town for a holiday • Describe something you have enjoyed doing on your holiday • Arrange to meet Sam when you return. Write 35 – 45 words on your answer sheet. Klay0
Hi Sam, Thanks for replying quickly. I’m really enjoying Nha Trang, the tour operator introduced a plethora of mouth-watering local dishes, trashes in the sea are nowhere to be seen and people here are extremely friendly. I haven’t got a chance to go out frequently, however, I found that waterskiing is a very pleasant sport to try on your next excursion to the place. I can’t wait until I see you again to tell you more about my trip. I’ll be back on Thursday, can we see each other on Saturday morning at my house? If that is suitable for you! See you soon Dorothy
Hi Sam,

Thanks for replying
quickly
. I’m
really
enjoying
Nha
Trang
, the tour operator introduced a plethora of mouth-watering local dishes, trashes in the sea are nowhere to be
seen
and
people
here are
extremely
friendly.

I haven’t
got
a chance to go out
frequently
,
however
, I found that
waterskiing
is a
very
pleasant sport to try on your
next
excursion to the place.

I
can’t wait until I
see
you again to
tell
you more about my trip.
I
’ll be back on Thursday, can we
see
each other on Saturday morning at my
house
? If
that is
suitable for you!

See
you
soon


Dorothy
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IELTS letter You are on a holiday in a town by the sea. You decide to write a postcard to your friend, Sam. Write a postcard to Sam. In your postcard, you should • Explain why you chose this town for a holiday • Describe something you have enjoyed doing on your holiday • Arrange to meet Sam when you return. Write 35 – 45 words on your answer sheet.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
104 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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