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your photograph one in photography competition and will be presented in an exhibition write a letter to frinds describe

your photograph one in photography competition and will be presented in an exhibition write a letter to frinds describe N21g
Dear Rohan, Hope you are doing well, we meet last week before you going to the work tour, unfortunate that time I forget to explain you about my photograph competition which is am win and my photograph selected in exhibition, I write this latter to you about my photograph competition. as know there one photograph competition coming in news Peper then i will send my photograph in that competition after few week come bosy called me that your photograph is selected, and you are winner of this competition and that selected photograph they present in exhibition, first i cnt bleve that and i cut his phone after one day again same person called me and tel me that my photos is selected and am winning 1000 doller prize. also selected photograph they put in exhibition. am really sock and next day i went that palace where exhibition is ongoing. when exbition guy saw me then suddenly he called his manager and take me on stage to interduced me to other photographers whos also coming in competitions. whenever you will come we will do the winning party for our friends, wating you best regardsrohan
Dear Rohan, Hope you are doing well, we
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IELTS letter your photograph one in photography competition and will be presented in an exhibition write a letter to frinds describe

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2 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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