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You work from home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a letter to the shop or company whcih suppliednthe equipment, in your letter a. Describe the problem with the equipment b. Explain how this problem is affecting your work c. Say what you want the shop or company to do

You work from home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a letter to the shop or company whcih suppliednthe equipment, in your letter a. Describe the problem with the equipment b. Explain how this problem is affecting your work c. Say what you want the shop or company to do 3o65

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you to raise my complaint regarding the HP printer, which I bought from your shop last week. I had visited your shop and bought a HP printer of model number HP-D2747, black in colour. During the first two days, It had been working properly, producing a well quality prints and clear photographs. The problem started on next day, when it stopped printing colour sheets. I had tried to fix it, unfortunately failed to do so. I have phoned your company twice to explain this problem, but no one from your company responded. I hope you could initiate the process to solve this. I work from home most of the days in a week, and usually takes plethora of printouts for my project. One day, I had to take prints of four main sheets for my presentation but could not able to take due to its technical error. Because of this problem, I was not able to prepare a document and eventually failed to present. I was repremanded by senior officals, who were anticipating my work. Lastly, I ahve several on going projects, I have to emphasize on my coming presentations, therefore, i suggest that you either replace it with new one, or repair it within the next two days. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully XYZ

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you to raise my complaint regarding the HP printer, which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop last week.

I had visited your shop and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 HP printer of model number HP-D2747, A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.black
black in colour
. During the first


two days, It had been working properly
, producing a well quality prints and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 photographs. The problem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started


on next
 day, when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 printing Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 sheets. I had tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it, unfortunately failed to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
. I have

phoned your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 twice to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 this problem, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no one from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 responded. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you could initiate

the process to solve this.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 work from home most of the days in a week, and usually
 takes plethora of printouts for my project. One day, I had Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphto.to!to?to:to,to;
to


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTake
take
 prints of four main sheets for my presentation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 could not able to take due to its technical error. Because of this


problem, I was not able to prepare a document and eventually
 failed to present. I was Possible spelling mistake found.reprimandedrep remanded
repremanded
 by senior Possible spelling mistake found.officials
officals
, who were

anticipating my work.

Lastly
, I Possible spelling mistake found.haveaveAHEAHVAVEAve
ahve
 several Did you mean "ongoing"?ongoing
on going
 projects, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 emphasize on my coming presentations, therefore
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 suggest that you either

replace it with new one, or repair it within the next
 two days.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully


XYZ