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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away mPmn
Dear Sir, I am writing to seek your permission for a two hours off from work on Monday, March 22. The reason why I need an early off from work is that my wife has recently been diagnosed with gall stones and recommended for a laparoscopic gall bladder removal surgery. As she is young I am very skeptical about organ removal hence I have an appointment from another gastrologist for a second opinion. Although the appointment is at 3pm and it should not take more than an hour, but due to heavy flow of patients at his clinic it can take half an hour more. Many times there are some emergency cases during the clinic timings and the patients have to wait longer than the stated time, therefore if any such situation occurs I will inform you immediately. The time bracket during my unavailability would be managed by my assistant, whom I have instructed to receive all calls and pen down all the note for me. After my return I plan to call back to the clients for their concerned matter. Thank You for your consideration. Your faithfully, Hina Kumail
Dear Sir,

I am writing to seek your permission for a two hours off from work on Monday, March 22. The reason why I need an early off from work is that my wife has recently
been diagnosed
with gall stones and recommended for a laparoscopic gall bladder removal surgery. As she is young I am
very
skeptical about organ removal
hence
I have an appointment from another
gastrologist
for a second opinion.

Although the appointment is at 3pm and it should not take more than an hour,
but
due to heavy flow of patients at his clinic it can take half an hour more.
Many
times there are
some
emergency cases during the clinic timings and the patients
have to
wait longer than the stated time,
therefore
if any such situation occurs I will inform you immediately.

The time bracket during my unavailability would
be managed
by my assistant, whom I have instructed to receive all calls and pen down all the note for me. After my return I plan to call back to the clients for their concerned matter.

Thank You for your consideration.

Your
faithfully
,

Hina
Kumail
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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