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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman, in your letter, • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman, in your letter, • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job. w3qd
Dear Sir, I am Brad Lee, I hope you remember me, when we met last weekend on 14th December while travelling to Perth from Adelaide in Air Australia flight number AI705. We had profound conversation and you also had told me about your restaurants business in different cities of Australia. I was offered a job in one of your restaurants. Therefore, I am writing to let you know that, I would be available for the job. I was working as a cooking manager in Hotel Grand INN, before I quit due to some family issues. Presently, I am unemployed, seeking an opportunity in the field of cooking. I have graduated from Hotel Management course and having three years of professional experience in restaurants. Therefore, I would be ecstatic, if you could provide me a role of cooking Manager. I feel enthusiasm in developing new skills, which will enhance the business growth. I adore people who works with me, which will also create a great work environment. Therefore, I am much suitable for this job. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Brad Lee
Dear Sir,

I am Brad Lee, I hope you remember me, when we met last weekend on 14th December while travelling to Perth from Adelaide in Air Australia flight number AI705. We had profound conversation and you
also
had
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told
me about your restaurants business in
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different
cities of Australia. I
was offered
a job in one of your restaurants.
Therefore
, I am writing to
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let
you know that, I would be available for the job.

I was working as a cooking manager in Hotel Grand INN,
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before
I quit due to
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some
family issues.
Presently
, I
am unemployed
, seeking an opportunity in the field of cooking. I have graduated from Hotel Management course and having three years of professional experience in restaurants.
Therefore
, I would be ecstatic, if you could provide me a role of cooking Manager.

I feel enthusiasm in developing new
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skills
, which will enhance the business growth. I adore
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people
who
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works
with me, which will
also
create a great work environment.
Therefore
, I am much suitable for this job.

Looking forward to hearing from you

Yours
faithfully


Brad Lee
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman, in your letter, • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

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