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Your parents will not let you go on holiday as they want you to study for your exam

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Your parents will not let you go on holiday as they want you to study for your exam Dear Ann, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about how I can persuade my parents to go on holiday. They want me to study hard for my recent exam. You know I have been looking for this event for a long time and I have a strong desire to participate in it. So, this reason, I have been preparing the exam so hard that I hope I Will take it with a high achievement. But my parents do not convince me and they do not let me to go on holiday. Now I do not want them to get upset, at the same time, I really want to go there. Now, I am in difficult situation that I do not know how I can tackle with this issue. It would be great help if you could advise me. I am looking forward that I will hear from you useful solution for my problem. Sincerely Lily.

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 you to study for your exam

Dear Ann,

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want
 me to study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for my recent exam.

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want
 to go there.

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Now
, I am in difficult situation that I do not know how I can tackle with this issue. It would be great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 if you could advise me. I am looking forward that I will hear from you useful solution for my problem.

Sincerely
 Lily. 