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Complaint letter about school canteen

Complaint letter about school canteen 15Don
Dear Mr Smith I am writing to complaint about the school canteen we have not got at school. We go to extra English course after school lessons and we have not got enough time to go home for lunch. It is difficult to do lessons when we are hungry. We have to buy fast food from corner shop. Please help us to open the canteen at school for the schoolchildren. I look fordward to receiving your reply. Please write as soon as possible Yours faithfully Mrs Sabrina
Dear Mr Smith I am writing to complaint about the
school
canteen we have not
got
at
school
. We go to extra English course after
school
lessons and
we have not
got
enough
time to go home for lunch. It is difficult to do lessons when we are hungry. We
have to
buy
fast
food from corner shop.
Please
help
us to open the canteen at
school
for the schoolchildren. I look
fordward
to receiving your reply.
Please
write as
soon
as possible Yours
faithfully
Mrs
Sabrina
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IELTS letter Complaint letter about school canteen

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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