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Complaint letter about school canteen

Complaint letter about school canteen 15Don

Dear Mr Smith I am writing to complaint about the school canteen we have not got at school. We go to extra English course after school lessons and we have not got enough time to go home for lunch. It is difficult to do lessons when we are hungry. We have to buy fast food from corner shop. Please help us to open the canteen at school for the schoolchildren. I look fordward to receiving your reply. Please write as soon as possible Yours faithfully Mrs Sabrina

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enough
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have to
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buy
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fast
 food from corner shop. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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Sabrina

IELTS letter Complaint letter about school canteen

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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