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Hello,my dear friend. Now I back to Lviv and the academy from polygon. Because of the quarantine measures in the academy I had to spend two mounth at the polygon of our academy in the Gvardiyske. I do not have a roots tell you many details of our traing,but i tell you something interesting. I spent two months in the polygon-barracks.We lived all in the once biggest room, but from agreed social distance. I learned many military subjects: tactical carity casuality core milytory and many other.

Hello, my dear friend. Now I back to Lviv and the academy from polygon. Because of the quarantine measures in the academy I had to spend two mounth at the polygon of our academy in the Gvardiyske. I do not have a roots tell you many details of our traing, but i tell you something interesting. I spent two months in the polygon-barracks. We lived all in the once biggest room, but from agreed social distance. I learned many military subjects: tactical carity casuality core milytory and many other. KwpVk
Hello, my dear friend. Now I back to Lviv and the academy from polygon. Because of the quarantine measures in the academy I had to spend two mounth at the polygon of our academy in the Gvardiyske. I do not have a roots tell you many details of our traing, but i tell you something interesting. I spent two months in the polygon-barracks. We lived all in the once biggest room, but from agreed social distance. I learned many military subjects: tactical carity casuality core milytory and many other.
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social distance. I learned
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IELTS letter Hello, my dear friend. Now I back to Lviv and the academy from polygon. Because of the quarantine measures in the academy I had to spend two mounth at the polygon of our academy in the Gvardiyske. I do not have a roots tell you many details of our traing, but i tell you something interesting. I spent two months in the polygon-barracks. We lived all in the once biggest room, but from agreed social distance. I learned many military subjects: tactical carity casuality core milytory and many other.

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89 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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