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Application letter for getting a job.

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Dear Mr JohnsonI am writing to apply letter about I enter the bank to work. I am going to the bank because also I have got degree and I have to work for my family. I am studying subjects depend finance for a long time. Now I studying 3-cource at finance. I have got certificate demand finance. Please help me to work at the bank. I look fordward to receiving your reply. Please write as soon as possible. Mrs Sabrina.
Dear Mr
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writing to apply letter about I enter the bank to work. I am going to the bank
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because
also
I have
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got
degree and I
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have to
work for my family. I am studying subjects
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depend
finance for a long time.
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Now
Did you mean "I'm studying", "I am studying", or "I was studying"?
I studying
3-cource at finance. I have
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got
certificate demand finance.
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Please
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help
me to work at the bank. I look
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fordward
to receiving your reply.
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Please
write as
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soon
as possible. Mrs Sabrina.
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IELTS letter Application letter for getting a job.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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