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You feel that you and your mother can't agree on anything

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to ask for your advice about I and my mother can not agree on anything these days. I have got a problem and I need your advice. Although, I am good at natural lessons and want to be doctor in my future life however my mother disagree with me. She say "You should be as an English teacher and go to other countries for studying". Furthermore, I am going to join in sports clubsbut my mother does not to be. She say that girl should study at school compulsory lessons at secondary school and sports clubs for only boys. Nowadays, we have such kind of problems. I look forward to receiving your advice as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Julia Roberts.
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to
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ask for
your advice about I and my mother can not
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agree
on anything these days. I have
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got
a problem and I need your advice. Although, I am
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good
at natural lessons and want to be doctor in my future life
however
my mother disagree with me. She say
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You should be as an English teacher and go to other countries for studying
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.
Furthermore
, I am going to
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join
in sports
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clubsbut
my mother does not to be. She say that girl should study at school compulsory lessons at secondary school and sports clubs for
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only
boys. Nowadays, we have such kind of problems.

I look forward to receiving your advice as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
, Julia Roberts.

IELTS letter You feel that you and your mother can't agree on anything

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  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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