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Appreciating theatre staff

Appreciating theatre staff WyjP0

Dear sir, I would really like to appreciate the well-being behaviour of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the theatre. I was a little late during the show, though I was running on the passage, while running my left leg was stuck on the stair just behind the hall gate. It stuck so terribly on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture. But at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and give me a hand of help, moreover provided me the best first aid they can give. They only didn’t help me on the spot, but give me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to see me again when they broadcast the same show on my recovering. I am no one to judge your hospitality but would like to add to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to prevent the similar scenarios in the adjacent future. Your sincerely

Dear sir,

I would really
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behaviour
 of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
. I was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 late during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
, though I was running on the passage, while running my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 leg was stuck
 on the stair This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 behind the hall gate. It stuck This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
terribly
 on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and give me a hand of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, moreover
 provided me the best first
 aid they can give. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 didn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me on the spot, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 give me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 me again when they broadcast the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 on my recovering.

I am no one to judge your hospitality This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the similar scenarios in the adjacent future.

Your sincerely