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Appreciating theatre staff

Appreciating theatre staff WyjP0
Dear sir, I would really like to appreciate the well-being behaviour of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the theatre. I was a little late during the show, though I was running on the passage, while running my left leg was stuck on the stair just behind the hall gate. It stuck so terribly on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture. But at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and give me a hand of help, moreover provided me the best first aid they can give. They only didn’t help me on the spot, but give me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to see me again when they broadcast the same show on my recovering. I am no one to judge your hospitality but would like to add to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to prevent the similar scenarios in the adjacent future. Your sincerely
Dear sir,

I would
really
like to appreciate the well-being
behaviour
of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the
theatre
. I was a
little
late during the
show
, though I was running on the passage, while running my
left
leg
was stuck
on the stair
just
behind the hall gate. It stuck
so
terribly
on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture.
But
at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and give me a hand of
help
,
moreover
provided me the best
first
aid they can give. They
only
didn’t
help
me on the spot,
but
give me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to
see
me again when they broadcast the same
show
on my recovering.

I am no one to judge your hospitality
but
would like to
add
to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to
prevent
the similar scenarios in the adjacent future.

Your
sincerely
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IELTS letter Appreciating theatre staff

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  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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