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your parents are both retired and modern number 11 city watching you work you decide to find a job in the city to take care of them

your parents are both retired and modern number 11 city watching you work you decide to find a job in the city to take care of them KlpXM
Dear Mr. Ronal I would like to apply for the position of receptionist advertised. My name is Nguyen Phuong. I'm working as a receptionist at a hotel in Tokyo. I have been doing this job for 3 years, and is always considered a talent employee with flying colours. Now I want to apply to the company to work. The main reason comes from my family problems, my parent retired, I wanted to take care of them conveniently, so I moved here. With 3 years of experience I'm confident with my abilities. I have good communication skills, I know how to handle unexpected situations with a positive attitude. That brought to me title of '' Outstanding Employee of the Year '' in the for 3 consecutive years. If I have chance to work for you, I will become an excellent receptionist in your company and help it grow more and more. Please consider my background to know more about my academic level and skill. I look forward to an interview from you to be able to speech in more detail and accurately more. I hope I can get your message soon. And wish you have a nice day
Dear Mr.
Ronal


I would like to apply for the position of receptionist advertised.

My name is Nguyen
Phuong
. I'm working as a receptionist at a hotel in Tokyo. I have been doing this job for 3 years, and is always considered a talent employee with flying
colours
.
Now
I want to apply to the
company
to work. The main reason
comes
from my family problems, my parent retired, I wanted to take care of them
conveniently
,
so
I
moved
here.

With 3 years of experience I'm confident with my abilities. I have
good
communication
skills
, I know how to handle unexpected situations with a
positive
attitude. That brought to me title of '' Outstanding Employee of the
Year
'' in the for 3 consecutive years. If I have chance to work for you, I will become an excellent receptionist in your
company
and
help
it grow more and more.

Please
consider my background to know more about my academic level and
skill
. I look forward to an interview from you to be able to speech in more detail and
accurately
more.

I hope I can
get
your message
soon
. And wish you have a nice
day
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IELTS letter your parents are both retired and modern number 11 city watching you work you decide to find a job in the city to take care of them

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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