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You are going to perform in a music festival in another town. Write an email to a friend about this. In your email, you should: • explain how you found out about the festival • describe what you are going to do in the festival • invite your friend to come and see you perform.

You are going to perform in a music festival in another town. Write an email to a friend about this. In your email, you should: • explain how you found out about the festival • describe what you are going to do in the festival • invite your friend to come and see you perform. lLQlQ
Dear Linda, How's it going? Sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time, but I've had exams, so I've been studying every free minute. Anyway, I'd love to hear all news and I'd like to invite you to come and see me performing in the music festival that will be held on December 12th in Antalya. As you know, I'm obsessed with playing the drums; therefore, when I heard about the music festival organuzed by my school, I participated in it without even thinking. You and I both know, I've been dying to perform on the drums infront of people and become famous, since I was ten. Well, to cut a lone story short, this is actualy a chance that comes to the person once in a blue moon, so I will finally go through this incredible experience. Furthermore, I'd really be as happy as Larry if you are able to come and join me. I'm getting stars in my eyes, that's why I need your support and encouragement. Finally, I hope you have the opportunity to come. Anyway, I guess it's time I got with the practicing I have been pausing for a long time. Can't wait to hear from you! Lots of love, Basmala.
Dear Linda, How's it going? Sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time,
but
I've had exams,
so
I've been studying every free minute. Anyway, I'd
love
to hear all news and I'd like to invite you to
come
and
see
me performing in the music festival that will
be held
on December 12th in
Antalya
. As you know, I'm obsessed with playing the drums;
therefore
, when I heard about the music festival
organuzed
by my school, I participated in it without even thinking. You and I both know, I've been dying to perform on the drums
infront
of
people
and become
famous
, since I was ten. Well, to
cut
a lone story short, this is
actualy
a chance that
comes
to the person once in a blue moon,
so
I will
finally
go through this incredible experience.
Furthermore
, I'd
really
be as happy as Larry if you are able to
come
and
join
me. I'm getting stars in my eyes, that's why I need your support and encouragement.
Finally
, I hope you have the opportunity to
come
. Anyway, I guess it's time I
got
with the practicing I have been pausing for a long time. Can't wait to hear from you! Lots of
love
,
Basmala
.
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IELTS letter You are going to perform in a music festival in another town. Write an email to a friend about this. In your email, you should: • explain how you found out about the festival • describe what you are going to do in the festival • invite your friend to come and see you perform.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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