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Write a letter to youyr friend to ask her about the music concert ticket that you bought for yourself but would not be able to attend the concert.

Write a letter to youyr friend to ask her about the music concert ticket that you bought for yourself but would not be able to attend the concert. 73D2A
Dear Sussan, I'm fit as a fiddle, and I hope that you're also sailing in the same boat. I have a surprise for you- a music concert ticket for which you were desiring for a long time. Actually, the concert is all about the classical music that you like the most. It will be on the 2nd December in the main auditorium of the Daisydale college. An eminent classical musician would perform over there, and its not known yet who the musician would be. To be honest, I had bought the ticket for myself; however, I'm going to my mother's house for a fortnight on 25th November as my employer granted me 15 days holidays, and it was totally unexpected. Thus, it would not be possible for me to attend the concert. If you're interested to listen the music, then you can pay a visit to my house anytime within 2 days and collect the ticket from me. Hope to see you soon. Yours truly, Eva.
Dear
Sussan
,

I'm fit as a fiddle, and I hope that you're
also
sailing in the same boat. I have a surprise for you- a music concert ticket for which you were desiring for a long time.

Actually, the concert is all about the classical music that you like the most. It will be on the 2nd December in the main auditorium of the
Daisydale
college. An eminent classical musician would perform over there, and its not known
yet
who the musician would be.

To be honest, I had
bought
the ticket for myself;
however
, I'm going to my mother's
house
for a fortnight on 25th November as my employer granted me 15 days holidays, and it was
totally
unexpected.
Thus
, it would not be possible for me to attend the concert.

If you're interested to listen the music, then you can pay a visit to my
house
anytime within 2 days and collect the ticket from me.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

Eva.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to youyr friend to ask her about the music concert ticket that you bought for yourself but would not be able to attend the concert.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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