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Letter about interview resilt

Letter about interview resilt ORqjG
Dear sir/ madamI am writing this letter to inquir about outcome of interview which was held last week regarding post of nurse incharge in your hospital. In your well reputed hospital which is located opposite main road near post ofic. I gave the interview for the post of Nurse incharge last week i already passed the written exam than i was called for interview which was last week interview was run very smoothly i gave all answers about questions and the intervewer was satisfied with my performance. I would like to request for result if the team salect me or not. Beacuse i gave the interview in other company too they are waiting for my response Thank you advance Your faithfully John
Dear sir/
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madamI
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am
writing this letter to
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inquir
about outcome of
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interview
which
was held
last week regarding post of nurse
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incharge
in your hospital. In your well reputed hospital which
is located
opposite main road near post
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ofic
. I gave the
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interview
for the post of Nurse
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incharge
last week
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i
already passed the written exam than
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i
was called
for
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interview
which was last week
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interview
was run
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very
smoothly
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i
gave all answers about questions and the
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intervewer
was satisfied
with my performance. I would like to request for result if the team
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salect
me or not.
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Beacuse
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i
gave the
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interview
in other
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company
too they are waiting for my response Thank you advance Your
faithfully
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John

IELTS letter Letter about interview resilt

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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