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Your office building does not have parking space. Write a letter to manager. Describe the problem. Suggest solution. Say why parking will benefits the staff

Dear Mr. Brown, I am an existing employee of your company. I am writing this letter to bring to your attention an issue I am facing from a long time. The situation has gotten wrost now and I had no option left, but to send you a lettter. I hope that your are well aware about the unavailability of parking space in our office building. Due to which, I used to park my car in the near by paid parking spot. I was paying $50 every month and it added extra buddern on my pocket. However, now that space went under construction and I had no other spot to park. Therefore, I kindly want you to request to introduce a new parking place in our building. I did some rearch and found that the land on the back of our building is on sale and think that it can be used as a parking place. I believe you understand that it will help a lot to our staff. As, people like me do not need to spend extra money. Moreover, It will saves a lot of time as we do not need to waste time to find a pplace to park. Thanks for your consideration. I am look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John Smith

Dear Mr. Brown,

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company
. I am writing this letter to bring to your attention an issue I am facing from a long time. The situation has gotten Possible spelling mistake found.worstwristFrostfrostwrest
wrost
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now and
 I had no option This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you a Possible spelling mistake found.letter
lettter
.

I hope that Did you mean “you are”, “yours are” or “your”?you areyours areyour
your are
 well aware about the unavailability of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 space in our office building. Due to which, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to park my car in the Did you mean “nearby”?nearby
near by
 paid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 spot. I was paying $50 every Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).month, and
month and
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 extra Possible spelling mistake found.burdensuddenbidderrudderbiddersrudders
buddern
 on my pocket. However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that space went under construction and I had no other spot to park. Therefore
, I kindly want you to request to introduce a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 place in our building. I did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.reachsearchrear ch
rearch
 and found that the land on the back of our building is on sale and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 place.

I believe you understand that it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 a lot to our staff. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 like me do not need to spend extra money. Moreover
, It will The modal verb ‘will’ requires the verb’s base form.save
saves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time as we do not need to waste time to find a Possible spelling mistake found.placepalacep placepp lace
pplace
 to park.

Thanks for your consideration. I am look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

John Smith