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your building does not have parking space. Write a letter to manager. Describe the problem. Suggest solution. Say why parking will benefits the staff

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention to a problem I am facing while trying to park my car near the office parking lot. As you know our office do not have any parking space of its own. I used to park in a nearby parking lot from my first day in the office. However, recently that parking was shut down by the city council to build a new shopping mall. As a result of this, I could not travel by car because the nearest parking available is far from where I work, and it is inconvenient for me to travel that much by public transport. Therefore, I would like to suggest that you should rent our office parking space as it is currently vacant. It would not only benefit me but also other employees working in the office since we all can travel to and from office conveniently. I would appreciate if you could do a favor to us by renting this parking space so that we could park our car. Yours Faithfully Manirul Khan
Dear Sir,

I am writing to bring to your attention to a problem I am facing while trying to park my car near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
lot.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know our
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office
do not have any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space of its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to park in a nearby
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parking
lot from my
first
day in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
.
However
, recently that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
was shut
down by the city council to build a new shopping mall.
As a result
of this, I could not travel by car
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the nearest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
available is far from where I work, and it is inconvenient for me to travel that much by public transport.

Therefore
, I would like to suggest that you should rent our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space as it is
currently
vacant. It would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
benefit me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
other employees working in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
since we all can travel to and from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
conveniently
.

I would appreciate if you could do a favor to us by renting this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we could park our car.

Yours
Faithfully


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Manirul
Khan
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IELTS letter your building does not have parking space. Write a letter to manager. Describe the problem. Suggest solution. Say why parking will benefits the staff

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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