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There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • Say what happened the last times you complained • Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir, I am a regular visitor of " Rio sports club". I am writing this letter to complain about the changing rooms facility in the center. I have objected the issue several times before, unfortunatily no action yet taken place. This is the 3rd time when I am complaing. People face hard time to access these room, which gets stucked and diffecult to open, because the door locks of these rooms are way outdated. As, I mentiod before, I already complaint the coach about this issue, However, he ignored it as nobody riase the voice except me. Therefore, installation of new locks will help a lot to use the rooms more oftenly, which is a huge problem and need to be solved promptly, because people like me have to wait for long time to get in to the room when door gets stucked. Thanks for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Smith

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Thanks for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

John Smith