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Your neighbours have written to complain about noise

Dear Sir, I have received your letter yesterday and I am really embarrased to read that i unknowingly have disturbed your personal space. As you know, I am living far away from my home and is hardly getting any time to meet my parents. So my two siblings who are younger to me and my parents have come here to spend quality time with me. After an year or so i am getting a chance to meet my family and to spend time with them. In this excitement, the rules of our society skip out of my mind. I really apologise for the disturbance me and my family have created in last few days. From today own-wards we all will take care of each and everything we do in the late hours. Beside this, we will make sure that you and your family does not face any problem from our end. Yours sincerely, Shefali Sharma
Dear Sir,

I have received your letter
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
yesterday and
I am
really
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embarrased
to read that
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
unknowingly
have disturbed your personal space. As you know, I am living far away from my home and is hardly getting any time to
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meet
my parents.
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So
my two siblings who are younger to me and my parents have
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come
here to spend quality time with me. After
Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.
an
year or
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so
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am getting a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my family and to spend time with them. In this excitement, the
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rules
of our society skip out of my mind.

I
really
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apologise
for the disturbance me and my family have created in last few days. From
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today
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own
-wards we all will take care of each and everything we do in the late hours.
Did you mean “besides” (= apart from that) which is commonly used to start a sentence?
Beside
this, we will
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make
sure that you and your family does not face any problem from our
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end
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Shefali
Sharma

IELTS letter Your neighbours have written to complain about noise

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
154 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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