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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night .Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog.Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen. mMb8
Dear Rekha, I am writing to ask you about your small dog that barks whole day and night. As I feel very irritated due to barking of the dog and my family members do not find peaseful environment in home. On top of that we have fear of thief too. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I am staying in your neighbourhood since 4 years and we have good bounding with each other so, you can understand my problems. My son is having his exam schedule from next month but he is unable to concentrate on his studying, while other family members can not sleep peasefuly. Moreover, my mother in law has an insomnia. I request you to find out reasons for the dog’s uneasiness. For instance, you may book the veterinary Dr’s appointment. In addition, you can check any insect or any small animal disturbing him. After finding reason about the dog’s anxiety we can look forwrd to solve the problems. Your friend, Amita
Dear
Rekha
,

I am writing to ask you about your
small
dog
that barks whole day and night. As I feel
very
irritated due to barking of the
dog
and my family members do not find
peaseful
environment in home.
On top of that
we have fear of thief too.

Let
me
explain
my situation in more detail. I am staying in your
neighbourhood
since 4
years and
we have
good
bounding with each other
so
, you can understand my problems. My son is having his exam schedule from
next
month
but
he is unable to concentrate on his studying, while other family members can not sleep
peasefuly
.
Moreover
, my
mother in law
has an insomnia.

I request you to find out reasons for the
dog’s
uneasiness.
For instance
, you may book the veterinary Dr’s appointment.
In addition
, you can
check
any insect or any
small
animal disturbing him.
After
finding reason about the
dog’s
anxiety we can look
forwrd
to solve the problems.

Your friend,

Amita
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IELTS letter Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen.

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  American English
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166 words
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