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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night .Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog.Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen. mMb8
Dear Rekha, I am writing to ask you about your small dog that barks whole day and night. As I feel very irritated due to barking of the dog and my family members do not find peaseful environment in home. On top of that we have fear of thief too. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I am staying in your neighbourhood since 4 years and we have good bounding with each other so, you can understand my problems. My son is having his exam schedule from next month but he is unable to concentrate on his studying, while other family members can not sleep peasefuly. Moreover, my mother in law has an insomnia. I request you to find out reasons for the dog’s uneasiness. For instance, you may book the veterinary Dr’s appointment. In addition, you can check any insect or any small animal disturbing him. After finding reason about the dog’s anxiety we can look forwrd to solve the problems. Your friend, Amita
Dear
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Rekha
,

I am writing to ask you about your
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small
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dog
that barks whole day and night. As I feel
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very
irritated due to barking of the
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dog
and my family members do not find
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peaseful
environment in home.
On top of that
we have fear of thief too.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in more detail. I am staying in your
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neighbourhood
since 4
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years and
we have
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good
bounding with each other
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so
, you can understand my problems. My son is having his exam schedule from
next
month
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but
he is unable to concentrate on his studying, while other family members can not sleep
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peasefuly
.
Moreover
, my
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mother in law
has an insomnia.

I request you to find out reasons for the
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dog’s
uneasiness.
For instance
, you may book the veterinary Dr’s appointment.
In addition
, you can
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check
any insect or any
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small
animal disturbing him.
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After
finding reason about the
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dog’s
anxiety we can look
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forwrd
to solve the problems.

Your friend,

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Amita

IELTS letter Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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