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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do 76Ln
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a regular passenger of your bus. I am writing this letter to complain about my dissatisfaction to the service of your bus company in our town. Recently, I always arrived late at my work due to the fact that your busses are also arriving late or sometimes they cancel their trip without prior notice. Moreover, you also have poor hygiene. I can see dust everywhere, the chairs have a bad odor and there are a lot of litters on the flooring. I highly recommend to increase the number of buses, It allows to depart and arrive on time. Before using the bus, inspect every corner, wipe all the dust, disinfect the chairs, and swipe the floor. It would be also very helpful if the company announce one day before if they would cance their trip so other commuter can easily change the way of their transportation. Thank you and I look forward to you reply. Yours Faithfully, Mikee
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a regular passenger of your bus. I am writing this letter to complain about my dissatisfaction to the service of your bus
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company
in our town.

Recently, I always arrived late at my work due to the fact that your busses are
also
arriving late or
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sometimes
they cancel their trip without prior notice.
Moreover
, you
also
have poor hygiene. I can
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see
dust everywhere, the chairs have a
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bad
odor and there are
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a lot of
litters on the flooring.

I
highly
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend increasing".
recommend to increase
the number of buses, It
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allows
Did you mean "departing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to depart
and arrive on time.
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Before
using the bus, inspect every corner, wipe all the dust, disinfect the chairs, and swipe the floor. It would be
also
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very
helpful if the
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company
announce one day
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before
if they would
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cance
their trip
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so
other commuter can
easily
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change
the way of their transportation.

Thank you and I look forward to you reply.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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Mikee

IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
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