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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it? QA21
Dear Sally, Hope this letter finds you well. I haven’t forgotten how much you helped me, my lovely friend, when you looked after my house and my puppies while I travelled to Bali last month. To thank you I bought two tickets to a music concert that is going to be held in the city hall next Friday. The concert will start at 8 pm. I hope you will be free by then and will be able to join me. Different bands are going to play rock-n-roll music, your favorite kind, so I am sure we are going to have fun there. Although I was only able to purchase two tickets for us, my friends Anna and Diana, whom you met at my last birthday party also bought tickets online. We can all go together, the more, the merrier. So, let me know if you are going to be able join us. Give my love to your family. Looking forward to seeing you at the city hall next Friday. Love, Patricia
Dear Sally,

Hope this letter finds you well. I haven’t forgotten how much you
helped
me, my lovely friend, when you looked after my
house
and my puppies while I travelled to Bali last month.

To thank you I
bought
two tickets to a music concert
that is
going to
be held
in the city hall
next
Friday. The concert will
start
at 8 pm. I hope you will be free by then and will be able to
join
me.
Different
bands are going to play rock-n-roll music, your favorite kind,
so
I am sure we are going to have fun there.

Although I was
only
able to
purchase
two tickets for us, my friends Anna and Diana, whom you met at my last birthday party
also
bought
tickets online. We can all go together, the more, the merrier.
So
,
let
me know if you are going to be able
join
us. Give my
love
to your family.

Looking forward to seeing you at the city hall
next
Friday.

Love
,

Patricia
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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