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You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life j39w
Dear John, My name is Michael, and I am your new tenant from Flat number 231. I am writing to share my views regarding the apartment that has been allotted to me. To begin with, I would like to commend you for the design of the apartment. I just love the modern style architecture of this place. Additionally, adequate ventilation system, attached washrooms and car porch facility make this flat worth living. However, I am facing minor problems that needs to be addressed. The first one is the temperamental functioning of the air conditioner. It starts with loud noises and does not give cooling sometimes. As I am new to this city, I am not aware of any electrician here. Would you please amend this for me or share the number of good electrician for the servicing of it? Also, the fire alarm of the kitchen is dysfunctional which could be hazardous for me and my family members. I am not ready to take any risk so I request you to repair it in one or two days so that I can live here with my family securely. I hope you would consider my requirements and do the necessary action in time. Looking forward for a positive reply! Yours truly, Michael.
Dear John,

My name is Michael, and I am your new tenant from Flat number 231. I am writing to share my views regarding the apartment that has
been allotted
to me.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, I would like to commend you for the design of the apartment. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the modern style architecture of this place.
Additionally
, adequate ventilation system, attached washrooms and car porch facility
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this flat worth living.

However
, I am facing minor problems that needs to
be addressed
. The
first
one is the temperamental functioning of the air conditioner. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
with loud noises and does not give cooling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
. As I am new to this city, I am not aware of any electrician here. Would you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
amend this for me or share the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
electrician for the servicing of it?

Also
, the fire alarm of the kitchen is dysfunctional which could be hazardous for me and my family members. I am not ready to take any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I request you to repair it in one or two days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
here with my family
securely
. I hope you would consider my requirements and do the necessary action in time.

Looking forward for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply!

Yours
truly
, Michael.
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IELTS letter You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
211 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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