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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it? gQG1
Dear Merita, I hope you are doing well, I have a small surprise for you as an appreciation for the help you gave during my final year examination, with all your study materials and notes. Words can't express how greatful I am for your kindness. Therefore I bought two tickets for both of us to the 'B and S 'concert. It will be on next friday at 8. 00 p. m. in the 'Sugathadasa' indoor stadium. Your favourite classical and country music will be played on that day by many great artists. Not only that your favourite guitarist, 'Chika' will be playing for the band. So I hope you will really enjoy this. Please confirm your participation by wednesday and let's have a memorable night. Can't wait to meet you on friday. With love, Niranjalee
Dear
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Merita
, I hope you are doing well, I have a
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small
surprise for you as an appreciation for the
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help
you gave during my final year examination, with all your study materials and notes. Words can't express how
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greatful
I am for your kindness.
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Therefore
I
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bought
two tickets for both of us to the 'B and S 'concert. It will be on
next
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friday
at 8. 00 p. m. in the '
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Sugathadasa
' indoor stadium. Your
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favourite
classical and country music will
be played
on that day by
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many
great artists. Not
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only
that your
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favourite
guitarist, '
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Chika
' will be playing for the band.
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So
I hope you will
really
enjoy this.
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Please
confirm your participation by
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wednesday
and
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let
's have a memorable night. Can't wait to
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meet
you on
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friday
. With
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love
,
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Niranjalee
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say: – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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