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MONTHLY WRITING TEST TASK 1 Time: 20 minutes A friend of yours is thinking of applying for the same course that you did at the university. He or she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give details of the course you took at the university • Explain why you recommend the university • Give some advice about how to apply

MONTHLY WRITING TEST TASK 1 Time: 20 minutes A friend of yours is thinking of applying for the same course that you did at the university. He or she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give details of the course you took at the university • Explain why you recommend the university • Give some advice about how to apply 216A

I am writing to offer my advise on the inquiry you made about the Cyber Security Course I studied at the University of Lagos. I believe it would be an excellent idea for you to also study it because of your background knowledge on Information Technology. The Cyber Security course explores the notion of safe practices on the Internet Space. Also, it involves teaching you how to recognize how hackers operate and how you can counter and mitigate their attack on your Information on the World Wide Web. I strongly advise that you study this course at the University of Lagos because they offer the best teaching approach to this Subject compared to other Universities in the Country. Although the fee is much higher compared to other Schools, the benefits you stand to achieve at the end of the day is far greater. In order to apply, I recommend that you take the pre application exams coming up on the 8th of March, 2021. The forms can be purchased at the admissions office for three thousand naira only. Once you have an average score of 50%, you will be offered a chance to study the course at the University of Lagos. I hope that my advise has given you the much needed information you require. Yours Sincerely, Ololade.

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 application exams coming up on the 8th of When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "March 2021".March 2021
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