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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night .Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog.Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen(write in a polite,respectful style)

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen(write in a polite, respectful style) k78K
Dear Rekha, Hi! How are your kids? I hope you are well. I am writing to ask you about your small dog that barks whole day and night. As I feel extremely irritated due to barking of the dog. Also, my family members do not find peacefully environment in home. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I am staying in your neighborhood since 4 years, and we have good attachement with each other so, you can understand my problems. My son has his exam next month but he is unable to concentrate on his study, while other family members can not sleep peacefuly. Moreover, my mother in law has insomnia. I request you to find out the reasons for the dog’s uneasiness. For instance, you may book the veterinary doctor’s appointment. In addition, you can check any insect or any animal disturbing him, after finding any reason about the dog’s anxiety we can look forward to solving the problems Your Sincerely, Amita
Dear
Rekha
,

Hi! How are your kids? I hope you are well. I am writing to ask you about your
small
dog
that barks whole day and night.
As
I feel
extremely
irritated due to barking of the
dog
.
Also
, my family members do not find
peacefully
environment in home.

Let
me
explain
my situation in more detail. I am staying in your neighborhood since 4 years, and we have
good
attachement
with each other
so
, you can understand my problems. My son has his exam
next
month
but
he is unable to concentrate on his study, while other family members can not sleep
peacefuly
.
Moreover
, my
mother in law
has insomnia.

I request you to find out the reasons for the
dog’s
uneasiness.
For instance
, you may book the veterinary doctor’s appointment.
In addition
, you can
check
any insect or any animal disturbing him, after finding any reason about the
dog’s
anxiety we can look forward to solving the
problems


Your
Sincerely
,

Amita
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IELTS letter Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter. -your reason for writing -What you would like to happen(write in a polite, respectful style)

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  American English
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