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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you W9ae
Dear John, Hope this letter find you well, I am writing this letter to thank you for having us on Christmas holiday at your home for a week. It was really great time we have spent together along with our families almost after 2 years. I will send you photos by email. However, as I came back home I realized that my wallet which is limited edition of Mont Blanc winter collection 2021 is missing and I remember that I have kept in the guest room side table and I forgot to pick that up because of rush. When you found it, could you please send it with Walter as he is still in your city and will come back by Wednesday. This will be quickest and safest way to getting the wallet. I’m sorry for this inconvenience and I promise will make it for you by buying dinner for me when we will meet next time, hopefully soon. Regards, Muhammad
Dear John,

Hope this letter find you well, I am writing this letter to thank you for having us on Christmas holiday at your home for a week. It was
really
great time we have spent together along with our families almost after 2 years. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you photos by email.

However
, as I came back home I realized that my wallet which
is limited
edition of Mont Blanc winter collection 2021 is missing and I remember that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
in the guest room side table and I forgot to pick that up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of rush.

When you found it, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it with Walter as he is
still
in your city and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back by Wednesday. This will be quickest and safest way to getting the wallet.

I’m sorry for this inconvenience and I promise will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it for you by buying dinner for me when we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
next
time,
hopefully
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Regards,

Muhammad

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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  American English
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160 words
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