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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. v.1

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. v. 1 dKwK

Respected Sir/Madam, I'am writing to you regarding the accommodation in Canada for one year, as i'am coming to learn diploma course I. e the duration of course is one year. The main purpose of writing letters is that i'am coming to Canada for diploma course which helps me to gain more knowledge moreover it helps to promote next level in my present company. As one of my project Mananger suggested to do one year diploma courses that will benefit to my career as well as it will enhance my knowledge. So i request you to give accommodation in ur agency it helps me a lot. I will be waiting further to your replyThanking you Yours sincerely Sampath kumar

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The verb 'suggested' is used with the gerund form: "suggested doing".suggested doing
suggested to do
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courses
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 as it will enhance my knowledge. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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Sampath
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