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You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter Explain the situation Describe your problems Tell him/her when you think you can move in

You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter Explain the situation Describe your problems Tell him/her when you think you can move in blq6
Dear Ms. williams, The objective of writing this letter is to let you know that we are unable to move in next week as per the plan. sudden unpleasant event made it impossible to go with the plan. Let me explain you my situation. This weekend my youngest son severely hurt himself while at his football training. After thorough medical examination doctor advise him complete rest. In my opinion it is not a wise step to go with the shift to the new place. So we are delaying it by at least two weeks. After discussing with my wife we came to a conclusion that we should must delay the move as it may lead to lot of issues. most important it will be very difficult for us to take him for physiotherapy every third day as it is quite far from the new home, Secondly his doctor is totally against any movement on the feet due to the fact that it will help in his speedy recovery. Would you kindly change the shifting to next month. I will share All the details regarding date and time on telephone with you. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours sincerely
Dear Ms.
williams
, The objective of writing this letter is to
let
you know that we are unable to
move
in
next
week as per the plan.
sudden
unpleasant
event
made it impossible to
go with
the plan.
Let
me
explain
you my situation. This weekend my youngest son
severely
hurt himself while at his football training.
After
thorough medical examination doctor advise him complete rest. In my opinion it is not a wise step to
go with
the shift to the new place.
So
we are delaying it by at least two weeks.

After discussing with my wife we came to a conclusion that we should
must
delay the
move
as it may lead to
lot of
issues.
most
important
it will be
very
difficult for us to take him for physiotherapy every third day as it is quite far from the new home,
Secondly
his doctor is
totally
against any movement on the feet due to the fact that it will
help
in his speedy recovery.

Would you kindly
change
the shifting to
next
month. I will share All the
details
regarding date and time on telephone with you. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter Explain the situation Describe your problems Tell him/her when you think you can move in

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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