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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? GR6m
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a second year engineering student, living in a double sharing room in Block-VI hotel. I am having issues with the my hostel roommate which is causing me great difficulties. My roommate plays loud music in the room during my study hours. Not merely that, during night while I would be sleeping, he starts talking loudly over phone and disturbs my sleep. Due to above problems, I am finding it difficult to focus on my studies. Additionally, due to his late night calls, my sleep cycle gets impacted which is directly affecting my morning class lectures. Despite all the request and explanation to him, he is unable to understand my situation and force me to write this complaint letter. Also, as the mid term exam is approaching, I am afraid these situations would gravely impact my preparation and future grades. I would request you to provide me a single sharing room with an attached washroom, preferably in higher floor. I would be very grateful for all your help. Yours Sincerely, Mike
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a second year engineering student, living in a double sharing room in Block-VI hotel. I am having issues with
the my hostel
roommate which is causing me great difficulties. My roommate plays loud music in the room during my study hours. Not
merely
that, during night while I would be sleeping, he
starts
talking
loudly
over phone and disturbs my sleep.

Due to above problems, I am finding it difficult to focus on my studies.
Additionally
, due to his late night calls, my sleep cycle
gets
impacted which is
directly
affecting my morning
class
lectures. Despite all the request and explanation to him, he is unable to understand my situation and force me to write this complaint letter.
Also
, as the
mid term
exam is approaching, I am afraid these situations would
gravely
impact my preparation and future grades.

I would request you to provide me a single sharing room with an attached washroom,
preferably
in higher floor. I would be
very
grateful for all your
help
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mike
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IELTS letter Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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