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You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning Explain why you had to be at the other event Explain what you will do to catch up

You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning Explain why you had to be at the other event Explain what you will do to catch up 080q
Dear Mr. Brannagan, I am the writing this letter regarding my absence from work on the annual company investment event. I apologize for my absence from work without any prior notice on such a essential day. Let me explain my situation, My mother slipped while working in the kitchen, I return back home from half way while coming for work. I immediately took her to hospital i the light of the fact that she was feeling sharp pain in her left knee as well as localized swelling. On examination everything came normal, she was advised one week rest. In all this mess I forgot to inform you regarding my absence. I sincerely apologize for this sudden No show at work. In order to make up for this unfortunate event I would love to provide all my time and energy to the unfinished agendas of this event. Looking forward to accomplish this unfinished task with desired result. I am awaiting a positive response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours sincerely
Dear Mr.
Brannagan
, I am the writing this letter regarding my absence from work on the annual
company
investment
event
. I apologize for my absence from work without any prior notice on such
a
essential day.

Let
me
explain
my situation, My mother slipped while working in the kitchen, I
return back
home from
half way
while coming for work. I immediately took her to hospital i the light of the fact that she was feeling sharp pain in her
left
knee
as well
as localized swelling. On examination everything came normal, she
was advised
one week rest. In all this mess I forgot to inform you regarding my absence. I
sincerely
apologize for this sudden No
show
at work.

In order to
make
up for this unfortunate
event
I would
love
to provide all my time and energy to the unfinished agendas of this
event
. Looking forward
to accomplish
this unfinished task with desired result. I am awaiting a
positive
response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning Explain why you had to be at the other event Explain what you will do to catch up

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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