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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include 8l3P
Dear Mr Sam, I am Muhammad Ahmed student from your research class in Iqra university. I am thankful for your help and teaching that I could complete my research so smoothly. However, I am writing this letter to ask you one small favor to write reference letter for me which is required for my next job. I am applying in one research company as a research coordinator which is international company and one of best in research work. This job will be very important for me for my professional as well as in personal life. It will give me great knowledge and experience for my future. I need one small favor from you to write reference letter for me which is required for this job. I will be thankful of you if you spent little time on it and explain my research work which I submitted to you as my final project which you appreciate a lot and please explain my strength in data collection and analyzing techniques. I hope you will reply on this mail. Yours faithfully, Muhammad Ahmed
Dear Mr Sam,

I am Muhammad Ahmed student from your
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research
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class
in
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Iqra
university. I am thankful for your
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help
and teaching that I could complete my
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research
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so
smoothly
.
However
, I am writing this letter to ask you one
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small
favor to write reference letter for me which
is required
for my
next
job.

I am applying in one
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research
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as a
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research
coordinator which is international
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and one of best in
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research
work.

This job will be
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very
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important
for me for my professional
as well
as in personal life. It will give me great knowledge and experience for my future.

I need one
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
favor from you to write reference letter for me which
is required
for this job. I will be thankful of you if you spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
time on it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
work which I submitted to you as my final project which you appreciate a lot and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my strength in data collection and analyzing techniques.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will reply on this mail.

Yours
faithfully
,

Muhammad Ahmed
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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