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your next door neighbor likes to listen late at night, because of the loud music you often lose sleep

your next door neighbor likes to listen late at night, because of the loud music you often lose sleep Ed22M

Dear Jack Hi Jack, this is your next door neighbor Jason. I’ve have a minor problem which I wanted to discuss with you, I’ve know you are in passion with hip hop music. I love music myself and it often could soothing my motion and relax while I’m stressed out, however recently you have been play music very loud late at night during bedtime which causing me having insomnia. Moreover I could have a hard time concentrating at work the next day, in short could you kindly lower the volume down much appreciated for your kind courtesy.

Dear Jack

Hi Jack, this is your next
 door neighbor Jason. Did you mean "I have"?I have
I’ve have
 a minor problem which I wanted to discuss with you, Did you mean "I’ve known"?I’ve known
I’ve know
 you are in passion with hip hop music. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 music myself and it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 could The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "soothe"soothe
soothing
 my motion and relax while I’m This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
 out, however
 recently you have been play music This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 loud late at night during bedtime which causing me having insomnia. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I could have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 time concentrating at work the next
 day, in short could you kindly lower the volume down much appreciated for your kind courtesy. 

IELTS letter your next door neighbor likes to listen late at night, because of the loud music you often lose sleep

Letter

American English

2 paragraphs

97 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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