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Write a letter to colleagues asking for help with your presentation-explain when and where the presentation will take place, what is the content of the presentation, what kind of help is needed.

Write a letter to colleagues asking for help with your presentation-explain when and where the presentation will take place, what is the content of the presentation, what kind of help is needed. 0wWX1
Dear Raman, How are you doing and how is work? Guess what, I have been nominated to make a seminar presentation at the next hospital clinical ground round which is slated to come up on the 25th of march, 2014 at the cardio- renal hall by 10: 00a. m. The medical director with all the top management committee are all coming for the presentation and I will be talking on current management of low back pain. Presently, I am at a cross road because my laptop just crashed, meaning my presentation has been wiped off from the system, and since you are a computer engineer and also a guru, I belief you should be able to help in retrieving all the information on my laptop. I have also informed Bimpe on the need to make sure the letters typed in inviting different secondary school students get to their principal, because we need to enlighten the public.
Dear
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Raman
, How are you doing and how is work? Guess what, I have
been nominated
to
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make
a seminar presentation at the
next
hospital clinical ground round which
is slated
to
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come
up on the 25th of
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "march 2014".
march, 2014
at the cardio- renal hall by 10: 00a. m.

The medical director with all the top management committee are all coming for the presentation and I will be talking on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
management of low back pain.
Presently
, I am at a cross road
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because
my laptop
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just
crashed, meaning my presentation has
been wiped
off from the system, and since you are a computer engineer and
also
a guru, I
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belief
you should be able to
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help
in retrieving all the information on my laptop.

I have
also
informed
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Bimpe
on the need to
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make
sure the letters typed in inviting
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different
secondary school students
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get
to their principal,
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because
we need to enlighten the public.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to colleagues asking for help with your presentation-explain when and where the presentation will take place, what is the content of the presentation, what kind of help is needed.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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