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You are a teacher. Write an introduction letter for you students

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Dear ………………………………. . , It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to introduce myself in writing. My name is Galina Gradinarova (but you can call me Ms. Galya) and I am excited to be your teacher as you are embarking on your final year of preparation for the IELTS examination. Having heard wonderful things about your learning skills and character, I can safely say it is my privilege to try and guide you towards achieving even greater levels of mastery. Since I happen to be the “new guy on the block” let me start by telling you a little bit about my background. I am a graduate of the English and American Studies programme at Sofia University St Kliment Ohridski. After taking my final examinations there I went on to study Cognitive Science at NBU. Simply put, this is the science of how people think, learn, perceive and process information about themselves and the world around them. The programme was taught in English, and we were given the opportunity to immerse ourselves in the international world of science and were immediately encouraged to conduct research, write articles, and take part in summer schools and conferences. A fun fact is that I got to put electrodes on people’s heads, observing their brainwaves for an EEG (electroencephalogram) experiment. Don’t worry, however, I do not have the slightest intention of doing this in our classroom. You are safe. But I would be interested in finding out what unusual activities you have had the chance of performing or would like to do. Joke aside, for the better part of my education and career I have been in some sort of academic environment. In 2010 I moved to yet another type of academic setting - the field of Architecture and Engineering. Since then I have been teaching ESP (English for Specific Purposes) at the University of Architecture, Civil Engineering and Geodesy. I hope to bring the above experience to our classroom and assist you in becoming more confident with your academic language skills.
Dear ……………………………….
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It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to introduce myself in writing. My name is
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Galina
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Gradinarova
(
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but
you can call me Ms.
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Galya
) and I
am excited
to be your teacher as you are embarking on your final year of preparation for the IELTS examination. Having heard wonderful things about your learning
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skills
and character, I can
safely
say it is my privilege to
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try and
guide you towards achieving even greater levels of mastery.

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Since
I happen to be the “new guy on the block”
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let
me
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start
by telling you a
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little bit
about my background. I am a graduate of the English and American Studies
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programme
at Sofia University St
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Kliment
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Ohridski
.
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After
taking my final examinations there I went on to study Cognitive Science at
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NBU
.
Simply
put, this is the science of how
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
, learn, perceive and process information about themselves and the world around them. The
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programme
was taught
in English, and we were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
the opportunity to immerse ourselves in the international world of science and were immediately encouraged to conduct research, write articles, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in summer schools and conferences. A fun fact is that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to put electrodes on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s heads, observing their brainwaves for an EEG (electroencephalogram) experiment. Don’t worry,
however
, I do not have the slightest intention of doing this in our classroom. You are safe.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I would
be interested
in finding out what unusual activities you have had the chance of performing or would like to do. Joke aside, for the better part of my education and career I have been in
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some
sort of academic environment. In
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2010 I
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moved
to
yet
another type of academic setting
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-
the field of Architecture and Engineering. Since
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then I
have been teaching ESP (English for Specific Purposes) at the University of Architecture, Civil Engineering and Geodesy. I hope to bring the above experience to our classroom and assist you in becoming more confident with your academic language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
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IELTS letter You are a teacher. Write an introduction letter for you students

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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