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You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow.

You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow. eEJAW
Hi Tyler Say, Do you have plans for tomorrow? I'm writing this letter today to invite you to go shopping with me this weekend. We will go to Clothes Market it not far from your house. We could meet outside at 7 o'clock because both of us will be free at this period of time. It will be fantastic My clothes is old I would like to buy some new clothes. We can also buy some clothes for both of us I am waiting for you to write me back, see ya!
Hi Tyler Say,

Do you have plans for tomorrow? I'm writing this letter
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today
to invite you to go shopping with me this weekend.

We will go to
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Clothes
Market it not far from your
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house
. We could
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meet
outside at 7 o'clock
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because
both of us will be free at this period of time. It will be fantastic

My
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clothes
is
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old
I would like to
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buy
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some
new
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clothes
. We can
also
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buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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clothes
for both of
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us


I am waiting for you to write me back,
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see
ya!

IELTS letter You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
92 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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