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Dear Neha, How are you? I hope you and you are family are safe and sound. I'm writing this letter to invite you on the most popular Mysore Dasara festival. One of the most colourful festival which is celebrated ten days with magnificent processions, cultural events, fairs, and exhibitions. Some of the major highlights of the party are Elephant procession, torchlight parade, e palace lighting, Durga pujar, wrestling and flower show. One of the major rituals is an elephant carries the Chamundeshwari's idol a top a golden chariot. It is celebrated widely across my country as the symbol of marking the victory of good over evil because the goddess durga killed the most powerful buffalo-headed demon by name Mahishaura on this day. The five-year-old Iconic Festival celebrations is an absolute treat to watch
Dear
Neha
,

How are you? I hope you and you are family are safe and sound. I'm writing this letter to invite you on the most popular Mysore
Dasara
festival.

One of the most
colourful
festival which
is celebrated
ten days with magnificent processions, cultural
events
, fairs, and exhibitions.
Some of the
major highlights of the party are Elephant procession, torchlight parade, e palace lighting,
Durga
pujar
, wrestling and flower
show
.

One of the major rituals is an elephant carries the
Chamundeshwari
's idol a

top
a golden chariot. It
is celebrated
widely
across my country as the
symbol


of marking the victory of
good
over evil
because
the goddess
durga
killed the

most
powerful buffalo-headed demon by name
Mahishaura
on this day.

The five-year-
old
Iconic Festival celebrations is an absolute treat to
watch
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IELTS letter Invite English speaking friend to your country

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  American English
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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