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Hi Jack, Coincidentally, my birthday is at the weekend too. My friends is went to my home and decorated here with balloon and decorative wire. They came with my birthday's cake. I was very surprised about it. After the meal, I cut birthday cake and everybody sang "Happy Birthday" to me and I put piece of cake to my bestie. Birthdays in our country are almost the same as yours. By the way, happy birthday to you, I hope you have more health and always amused. See ya Trang

Hi Jack,

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, my birthday is at the weekend too. My friends You should probably use: "are".are
is
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 to my home and decorated here with balloon and decorative wire. They came with my birthday's cake. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 surprised about it. After the meal, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 birthday cake and everybody sang Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Happy BirthdayUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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 to me and I put piece of cake to my bestie. Birthdays in our country are almost the same as yours. By the way, happy birthday to you, I hope you have more health and always amused.

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See
 ya

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