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Hi Jack, Coincidentally, my birthday is at the weekend too. My friends is went to my home and decorated here with balloon and decorative wire. They came with my birthday's cake. I was very surprised about it. After the meal, I cut birthday cake and everybody sang "Happy Birthday" to me and I put piece of cake to my bestie. Birthdays in our country are almost the same as yours. By the way, happy birthday to you, I hope you have more health and always amused. See ya Trang
Hi Jack,

Coincidentally
, my birthday is at the weekend too. My friends
You should probably use: "are".
is
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went
to my home and decorated here with balloon and decorative wire. They came with my birthday's cake. I was
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very
surprised about it. After the meal, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
birthday cake and everybody sang
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Happy Birthday
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"
to me and I put piece of cake to my bestie. Birthdays in our country are almost the same as yours. By the way, happy birthday to you, I hope you have more health and always amused.

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See
ya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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