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Letter to invite your friend for a party

Letter to invite your friend for a party xaVA6

Dear Smith, I hope you're doing very well. Its been long time since we met. Moreover, I have been busy during few days with my exam. As you know, our current home is far from my school. Therefore, We have purchased a new flat in Dharma Society. We will move into new home next week. So, I would like to invite you and you're family house warming party on 30th September. The party start at 6 P. m. The main attraction of this house. its, roof garden. So, I arranged the party at roof area. Some dance and music activities also be held. I also planned some Surprising games also. Since you're my childhood friend, You must be need to be present in the party. Its would be fun to have you here. See you soon. Yours friend, payal

Dear Smith, I hope you're doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt has
Its
 been long time since we met. Moreover
, I have been busy during few days with my exam. As you know, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 home is far from my school. Therefore
, We have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a new flat in Dharma Society. We will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 into new home next
 week. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would like to invite you and Did you mean "your"?your
you're
 family This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.house-warminghousewarming
house warming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 on 30th September. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 at 6 P. m. The main attraction of this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIts
its
, roof garden. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I arranged the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 at roof area. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 dance and music activities also
be held
. I also
 planned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Surprising games also
. Since you're my childhood friend, You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be need
 to be present in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
Its
 would be fun to have you here. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours friend, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpayal.payal!payal?payal:payal,payal;
payal