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Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: * thank them for the invitation * mention what plans you already have * suggest when you can meet them

Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: * thank them for the invitation * mention what plans you already have * suggest when you can meet them DKgo
Dear Mr and Mrs Arthur, Greetings for the day! I am writing this letter to seek apology from you as i may not be able to attend the party at your home on the occasion of your son, Richard's birthday next Saturday. Because of the prescheduled plan of receiving my uncle and aunt from the airport, deters me to attend the party. At the onset, I would like to thank you for the invitation of the birthday party. I am glad as well as honoured to receive the invitation from you. Also, this was a great opportunity to get closer with you and your family in order to expand our relation with each other. Further, since i have to receive my uncle and aunt from The Toronto Airport on Saturday evening, i cannot attend the party. They are coming from Italy by the flight number- CA0278 and the flight is expected to arrive at 7. 30 pm. Along with that, they want me to ride them to the house safely because they are coming to Toronto for the first time. Therefore, there is no other way to alter the plan. Finally, we can meet some other day. Infact, i would suggest you to give me the honour to plan a get together for you and your family on 7th February 2021 in my house if it is convenient to you. Additionally, as my uncle and aunt are planning to stay with me for a month, they may enjoy the company of your wife and children and spend some quality time with them. Let me know when you can do that. Birthday wishes to your son in advance. Have a great party. With love, Mathew
Dear Mr and Mrs Arthur,

Greetings for the day! I am writing this letter to seek apology from you as
i
may not be able to attend the party at your home on the occasion of your son, Richard's birthday
next
Saturday.
Because
of the
prescheduled
plan of receiving my uncle and aunt from the airport, deters me to attend the party.

At the onset, I would like to thank you for the invitation of the birthday party. I am glad
as well
as
honoured
to receive the invitation from you.
Also
, this was a great opportunity to
get
closer with you and your family in order to expand our relation with each other.

Further
, since
i
have to
receive my uncle and aunt from The Toronto Airport on Saturday evening,
i
cannot attend the party. They are coming from Italy by the flight number- CA0278 and the flight is
expected
to arrive at 7. 30 pm. Along with that, they want me to ride them to the
house
safely
because
they are coming to Toronto for the
first
time.
Therefore
, there is no other way to alter the plan.

Finally
, we can
meet
some
other day.
Infact
,
i
would suggest you to give me the
honour
to plan a
get
together for you and your family on 7th February 2021 in my
house
if it is convenient to you.
Additionally
, as my uncle and aunt are planning to stay with me for a month, they may enjoy the
company
of your wife and children and spend
some
quality time with them.
Let
me know when you can do that.

Birthday wishes to your son in advance. Have a great party.

With
love
,

Mathew
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IELTS letter Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: * thank them for the invitation * mention what plans you already have * suggest when you can meet them

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  American English
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283 words
6.0
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