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You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community. Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter introduce your committee say why you are having the meeting invite the MP to attend

You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community. Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter introduce your committee say why you are having the meeting invite the MP to attend VABK
Dear Secretary to MPA, I take this opportunity to introduce myself as the Patron in Chief of the town committee of “AR garden” - a housing society in the suburbs of Lahore. Our committee consists of five members including two owners of our society and remaining three being the elected representatives of the local residents including the undersigned. The primary objective of our organization is to secure the interests of the inhabitants of our town such as security and maintenance of green belts, street lights and roads. We are holding a high level meetup, on next weekend, to discuss the possible ways of increasing the greenery in our home town and for this important gathering, we would like to invite the worthy MPA to participate in our session. Undoubtedly, his participation and valuable suggestions on increased plantation will be of utmost importance for us. Kindly convey our heartiest invitation to the respected MPA to grace the occasion with his presence on Saturyday Feb 28, 2021 at 3PM. Yours turly, Fahad Tahami Patron in Chief
Dear Secretary to MPA,

I take this opportunity to introduce myself as the Patron in Chief of the town committee of “AR garden”
-
a housing society in the suburbs of Lahore. Our committee consists of five members including two owners of our society and remaining three being the elected representatives of the local residents including the undersigned. The primary objective of our organization is to secure the interests of the inhabitants of our town such as security and maintenance of green belts, street lights and roads.

We are holding a high level meetup, on
next
weekend, to discuss the possible ways of increasing the greenery in our home town and for this
important
gathering, we would like to invite the worthy MPA to participate in our session.
Undoubtedly
, his participation and valuable suggestions on increased plantation will be of utmost importance for us.

Kindly convey our heartiest invitation to the respected MPA to grace the occasion with his presence on
Saturyday
Feb 28, 2021
at 3PM.

Yours
turly
,

Fahad
Tahami


Patron in Chief
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IELTS letter You are organising a local committee meeting. You would like a local MP to attend the meeting to contribute to a discussion about green areas in the community. Write a letter of invitation to the MP's secretary, Mrs Shelton. In your letter introduce your committee say why you are having the meeting invite the MP to attend

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