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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and want to invite your friend from an english speaking country write him / her a letter and invite your friend ,explain what happens at the party , describe the tradition , why its important in your country, say why its important for your friend to be there

There will be a traditional celebration in your country and want to invite your friend from an english speaking country write him / her a letter and invite your friend, explain what happens at the party, describe the tradition, why its important in your country, say why its important for your friend to be there pWLL
Dear Kiran, How are you? Hope you are doing fine. I am writting this letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival Diwali with us in this year. When we finished our university studies, you promised me to visit my house and stay with us for few days. I think, this is the perfect time for that. This is the festival of light and also we are celebrating this as a commernce of return journey of krishna after 14 years from ayodhya. One month before the festival we will buy new cloths for wearing this day. On the day of festival we will worship the goodness of lekshmi, we are believing she will blessed with us wealth and also burn the cracks. I hope this occasion will help you for your research studies. My parents are waiting to see you because I told them regarding you alot. I would like to invite your parents also, if they have time to spend. I am sure, this is the most memorable days for you. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovinglyHema
Dear Kiran, How are you? Hope you are doing fine. I am
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writting
this letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional
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festival
Diwali with us in this year. When we finished our university studies, you promised me to visit my
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house
and stay with us for few days. I
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think
, this is the perfect time for that. This is the
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festival
of light and
also
we are celebrating this as a
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commernce
of return journey of
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krishna
after 14 years from
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ayodhya
. One month
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before
the
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festival
we will
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buy
new cloths for wearing this day. On the day of
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festival
we will worship the goodness of
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lekshmi
, we
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are believing
she will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "bless"
blessed
with us wealth and
also
burn the cracks. I hope this occasion will
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help
you for your research studies. My parents are waiting to
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see
you
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because
I
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told
them regarding you
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alot
. I would like to invite your parents
also
, if they have time to spend. I am sure, this is the most memorable days for you. Hope to
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see
you
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soon
. Yours
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lovinglyHema
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IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and want to invite your friend from an english speaking country write him / her a letter and invite your friend, explain what happens at the party, describe the tradition, why its important in your country, say why its important for your friend to be there

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  American English
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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