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Your neighbours write a letter to complain about or write a letter to your neighbours to apologise and discuss the videos situations that causes noises

Your neighbours write a letter to complain about or write a letter to your neighbours to apologise and discuss the videos situations that causes noises Nm6kW
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams, I am writing in regards to the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it. I started learning the piano recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a piano teacher to teach me during the weekends and I am sorry that the noise reached your flat. I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs Williamds. I did not expect the sound of my piano to be so loud and reach your rooms. I totally understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies. As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my piano classes at my tutor's house instead of mine. This way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you. I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship. Yours sincerely, Alfred Harris
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams,

I am writing
in regards to
the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it.

I
started
learning the
piano
recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the
only
free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a
piano
teacher to teach me during the
weekends and
I am sorry that the noise reached your flat.

I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs
Williamds
.
I
did not
expect
the sound of my
piano
to be
so
loud and reach your rooms.
I
totally
understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies.

As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my
piano
classes at my tutor's
house
instead
of mine. This way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you.

I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship.

Yours
sincerely
,

Alfred Harris
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IELTS letter Your neighbours write a letter to complain about or write a letter to your neighbours to apologise and discuss the videos situations that causes noises

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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