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You want to go to Wiston University to do a Master's degree in History, write a letter applying for a place on the course

You want to go to Wiston University to do a Master's degree in History, write a letter applying for a place on the course 3A9Gb

Dear Sir/MadamI would like to applying for admission to the Wiston University to do a Master's degree in history. I am 27 years old and I have completed a Bachelor's degree in History at Pedagogical Institute where it is situated in Mascow. First class was taken at Primary school in the centre of Mascow. I was interested in history When I was young. History is extremely interesting for me. Since the completion of my BA I have spent five years working as a History teacher at school. This work is very enjoyable. Teaching pupils is difficult. I am patient because teachers need time to teach pupils for the curtain things. I am not only knowledgeable, creative but also skillful, alert. I can speak in three foriegn languages. Last year I held C1 certificate from EnglishI look forward to hearing from you the nearest future. Yours faithfully Sara Winters

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 teacher at school. This work is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 enjoyable. Teaching pupils is difficult. I am patient This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 teachers need time to teach pupils for the curtain things. I am not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 knowledgeable, creative This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 skillful, alert. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 can speak in three Possible spelling mistake found.foreign
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 look forward to hearing from you the nearest future. Yours faithfully
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