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Invitation letter from friend

Invitation letter from friend Vl5wm
Dear Rudy, Thank you so much for your invitation. It’s a really generous offer to put me up at your place in Tokyo. I’d really like to come and it’s very kind of you but unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I’ve just started a new teaching job, and I’ve been working around the clock. It’s been intense! I don’t mean to complain. I’ve been enjoying it immensely and the school I’m working at is actually our old high school, which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mrs Brown? She is actually my supervisor! Could you let me know for another time I can visit? Because of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I’ll also be free in winter so if you’re available then, I’d certainly love to escape the cold to visit you. I cant wait to hear from you. Your friend, Jean
Dear Rudy,

Thank you
so
much for your invitation. It’s a
really
generous offer to put me up at your place in Tokyo. I’d
really
like to
come
and it’s
very
kind of you
but
unfortunately I won’t be able to
make
it due to my hectic work schedule.

I’ve
just
started
a new teaching job, and I’ve been working around the clock. It’s been intense! I don’t mean to complain. I’ve been enjoying it
immensely
and the school I’m working at is actually our
old
high school, which has been
a lot of
fun. Do you remember Mrs Brown? She is actually my supervisor!

Could you
let
me know for another time I can visit?
Because
of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I’ll
also
be free in winter
so
if you’re available then, I’d
certainly
love
to escape the
cold
to visit you.

I
cant
wait to hear from you.

Your friend,

Jean
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IELTS letter Invitation letter from friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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