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You used a taxi service forgot your phone with your wallet in the taxi after which the driver found you brought you back. Thanks to that service

You used a taxi service forgot your phone with your wallet in the taxi after which the driver found you brought you back. Thanks to that service Jlbjw
Dear sir or Madam. I am wrting these few lines to thanks to bring my phone and wallet. I am commuter and everyday i take taxi to work. Last friday morning when i woke up late, it was about 7 30 at o'clock. That day i had meeting conference with workers at 8 00 o'clock. As i got up late, i was hurry up reaching to my work. I had to take taxi because it took 15 minutes to go there. When i got taxi, i only looked my watch time while i was going there. The taxi driver reached me soon. As soon as i paid money, i went to my work soon. That time i forgot my phone and wallet as i was hurry up. The driver was so kindly person. Because when he saw my things, he came back in order to bring me my company. Even if i saw driver, i was bilissfuly happy, it made me exciting. Thank you again for bringing my phone and wallet. Yours faithfully.
Dear sir or Madam. I am
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these few lines to thanks to bring my phone and wallet. I am commuter and
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everyday
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i
take
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taxi
to work. Last
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friday
morning when
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woke up late, it was about 7 30 at o'clock. That day
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i
had meeting conference with workers at 8 00 o'clock. As
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i
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got
up late,
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i
was
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hurry
up reaching to my work. I had to take
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taxi
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because
it took 15 minutes to go there. When
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i
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got
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taxi
,
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i
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only
looked my
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watch
time while
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was going there. The
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taxi
driver reached me
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soon
. As
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soon
as
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i
paid money,
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i
went to my work
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soon
. That time
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forgot my phone and wallet as
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i
was
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hurry
up. The driver was
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so
kindly person.
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Because
when he
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saw
my things, he came back in order to bring me my
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company
. Even if
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i
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saw
driver,
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i
was
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bilissfuly
happy, it made me exciting. Thank you again for bringing my phone and wallet. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You used a taxi service forgot your phone with your wallet in the taxi after which the driver found you brought you back. Thanks to that service

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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